Alison proves once again her mastery as I over-panel and overwrite. The new version covers the same material, though it overlaps with another device that’s been largely removed, which is the TV interview. Between exercising that device and the narration, I paired back the laziest methods for delivering exposition. Unfortunately, I don’t really think I was up to the challenge of making my incredibly complicated plot sensible without them. Live and learn.

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