I regret how crammed the original page was with text and narration, but big, big props to the artist, Alison, for managing to cram in a gambit of emotions. She is fantastic at doing a lot with a little space. Since the narration was removed, my favorite lines were fed to other characters. Here, Mike, the “Sky Marshal” has an extended cameo. While adding him here sort of clutters up the story in a way that I really didn’t need, he should have been in the original in a bigger way, so his expanded role was a necessity.

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