Thus ends my first, biggest blunder of the rescript. Joan and her complicated feelings fades into the background, replaced with what felt like wholly necessary machinations and chess board moving amongst the Oligarchy. This rewriting also results in a bit of scene-jockeying, so I’m going to include the most relevant pages below out of sequence from their original publication. I won’t do this wholesale with relevant bits, because I’ll have to start cutting out individual panels. You might notice, for example, that President Decade’s speech began much earlier in the rescript.

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