Removing the flashback sequence also made it necessary for me to reorder the flow of the conversation between Violet and Elly, exercising Joan’s inherit sympathy for Elly’s situation. This is my first, biggest blunder, in rescripting Issue No. 1. Joan’s sympathy in this moment really conflicts nicely with her resentment of Elly in Issue No. 2, and I liked that she had a complicated response to the whole thing. Oh, well. I guess her sympathy is still implied, by the decision she makes in Issue No. 4?

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